i felt sorry for what happened to mapleshade in the past but she went through a lot of trouble with this whole getting back at her lover thing. i mean her old mate was the father of crookedjaw's dad and she did all that from something that happend long ago. she's not all there..
This is absolutely BREATHTAKING. However I do have some critique for his jaw. I'd suggest exaggerating it a bit more, right now it basically looks like he simply has an underbite rather than a broken, crooked jaw. But everything else is simply wonderful. Fantastic job. :3